Monday 16 April 2012

No escape.

I have spent nearly the whole day editing my novel 'Red Kite'

It's hard work reading over and over again the very same words that I have written over and over again. I think the editing process is one of the most difficult parts of producing a novel because sometimes you have to be brutal and get rid of a few thousand words and sometimes you may need another thousand words to make a scene work.

After three hours I got to the point when I needed a break from it. I needed a walk, so I took myself off to the Clee Hills. They are very close to where I live and it is also where my novel is set.

Within minutes of starting my walk, I looked up to see these two tiny figures walking across the quarry. You can hardly see them and may not even think that so unusual, but in fact that is an image from my novel and one that I hope to use on the back cover. The only difference is they are not flying a red kite as my characters would be in the book.

I carried on and enjoyed the fresh air. I felt the wind on my face and watched buzzards and crows fly over the summit while the sheep grazed contentedly on the slopes of the hill.

On my way back down I saw a man carrying something to the edge of the hill. It was one of those small model aeroplanes, the same size as a kite. It was also red!

He launched it into the air and it soared for a moment just like a life sized glider would do, then the wind got hold and it crashed onto the ground - just like the kite does in my story.


Today my novel literally came to life while I was trying to escape it. I loved every moment of it and was glad that I hadn't just left it sitting there on my computer. It had followed me somehow in my mind, locked into my thoughts and imagination and when I came back I couldn't wait to start writing again.

I am not suggesting that this is the right way for everyone, sometimes you really do need to escape from your work and take a break away from it but today this worked for me.

8 comments:

  1. I always think a good walk helps to put things into perspective!

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    1. It does Simon, it's a great way to recharge energy and get some fresh air too. I felt so invigorated by getting out there and thinking about my writing while not being chained to my PC

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  2. In someways Di I do the same. As part of my novel is set up in Rothbury in Northumberland I often, just to get some perspective on the area, visit it on google maps (it's a bit far to walk lol). I do know the area but to go and see my great grandfather's cottage, the alms houses where my aunt and uncle used to live, makes it more real to me and it does bring life to both the story and the characters. I am really looking forward to reading your novel, I may even take my Kindle and sit and read some of it up on Clee Hill with those fabulous views. xx

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    1. It is wonderful to bring a story to life Sue and to experience the area where a story is set makes it feel real to the writer and hopefully the reader too!

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  3. Lovely to see things coming together for you. Used to be called serendipity, now it's called synergy.

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    1. I can't wait for it now Yvonne, I am starting to believe it can happen. I much prefer the word serendipity, it's such a happy sounding word and one that fits my magical discovery so well.

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  4. It's strange, the way things motivate you, Di, and that sighting was truly amazing. I've been avoiding my sequel for far too long, I HATE sequels, but now I've put Book One on the covers there is no escape. Then I came across a very short 'book' on kindle about motivation, written by a woman I know to be really motivated and at last I'm surging ahead, I've written the first draft! xx

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    1. Wonderful Carole, you go from strength to strength and it inspires me! It's wonderful seeing all the things you are doing.

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